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Post by valerian on Sept 28, 2015 17:06:29 GMT -5
Name: ValerianAlias: Val Age: 17 Grade: 11th Height: 6"9 Weight: 160 Eye Color: Red Hair Color: White Appearance: Personality: Very straight forward person, isn't much of a loud or talkative person, mainly because how he was raised his master.. He avoids social confrontation to best of his abilities but despite that he still maintains a dry humor, making sarcastic jokes or poking fun at people who don't see eye to eye with him.Fighting Style: Silat / Counter Fighter [ He is a master at this style, Counter Fighter- He utilizes his opponents weaknesses or Lack of Defense and Knowledge.]Strengths:Hard Working, Good With Technology, Honest Weaknesses: Not Very Built/Weak, Self-Conscious, Shy/Anti-SocialHistory: Mistake Child, Kicked out on the streets at age of 3, Picked up by an old man who is a master in the martial art of silat and was raised to be the best and nothing less, entered school at age of 16, 1st day of school was called abnormal because of his hair color and eyes by his classmates and snapped jumping at his peers, killing 2 and injuring 3 who tried to stop the assault. After that incident it was decided he was to attend PHS #552.Other: Doesn't know his biological last name.
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Post by valerian on Sept 28, 2015 17:12:45 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2015 18:14:32 GMT -5
A few things.
1) While you have the basic traits of the personality down, a little bit of elaboration would be ideal. A small paragraph would be fine.
2) You have your fighting style down in name, but how does he apply it in a fight? Is he a master of his style, or still learning it as he goes along?
3) A bit more detail is needed in the history, a couple more sentences. Ideally, you'd state how he ended up at 552.
Once that's done, I can approve you.
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Sept 28, 2015 19:13:47 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2015 19:13:47 GMT -5
Approved.
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