Post by Amazing Dapper Fish on Oct 7, 2015 11:09:53 GMT -5
TALLY HO~!
Appearance: Neither of the links are working properly. I'd suggest going to Imgur and uploading them then linking them here. Google it.
Personality: Please expand. What does she like, dislike? Is she afraid of things? What are her goals? What does she do if someone doesnt agree with her? Currently, your personality is too vague and seems to border on mary sue-ish.
Fighting Style: You cannot start with magic, special abilities or anything too unusual. As your character is a student in a strict school for delinquents, you can't start with guns either.
Strengths and Weaknesses: These are supposed to be more combat oriented. Please adjust them.
History: I'm not even going to touch this until you edit out all mentions of magic and the like. 552 takes place in the real world for the most part. There are no secret magical wars going on. Our site is basically set during the beginning of all this weird stuff happening, but most people have no connection to it.
You're also missing the second post. If you dont know what the second post is, go re-read the profile template again
Please reply to this thread once and only when you have done these edits.
Appearance: Neither of the links are working properly. I'd suggest going to Imgur and uploading them then linking them here. Google it.
Personality: Please expand. What does she like, dislike? Is she afraid of things? What are her goals? What does she do if someone doesnt agree with her? Currently, your personality is too vague and seems to border on mary sue-ish.
Fighting Style: You cannot start with magic, special abilities or anything too unusual. As your character is a student in a strict school for delinquents, you can't start with guns either.
Strengths and Weaknesses: These are supposed to be more combat oriented. Please adjust them.
History: I'm not even going to touch this until you edit out all mentions of magic and the like. 552 takes place in the real world for the most part. There are no secret magical wars going on. Our site is basically set during the beginning of all this weird stuff happening, but most people have no connection to it.
You're also missing the second post. If you dont know what the second post is, go re-read the profile template again
Please reply to this thread once and only when you have done these edits.
