The Icy dictator, Aisu senshi. [Story. Opinions are allowed]

It all started on a harsh, winter night, the wind was howling and the snow was falling, everything seemed peaceful besides this, people were inside exchanging stories and jokes, having fun all around. This town named; Kyōgoku, was in the middle of a crisis and that was that their ruler was dying, he had very few days left, maybe three at max and this had everyone in worry since they all loved their ruler, I mean sure, he was strict at times and had a bad temper but everything he did was for the sake of the Town. He had to choose between a few choices before he died however; Choice one, was to pass dictatorship over to one of his sons and Choice Two, was to create a Town council and have it run on democracy, however... The choice was not an easy one, nor would he have very much time to think about it
"Sir, you need to hurry up and decide, we're running short on time, if you don't decide now, the Town could fall into chaos..." His worried soldier would say to him but he was in a foul mood, not to be messed with "Scram! I understand my own situation, I am doing my best to make my decision, leave at once before I decide to have you killed!" he'd continue to use all his strength to stay alive and to decide on a choice but he just couldn't decide so he decided that he'd have his sons fight, Aisu and Kasai, one named after Ice and the other, Fire, it was like a perfect Rivalry. He'd simply get them to have a fight that involved first to draw blood would win but what he would not expect was the Result of the fight. Before the fight even began the old man had said to his children
"Aisu, if you win this fight, I shall make you my successor and you shall rule this town. Kasai, if you win this fight, I shall create a council of which you shall be in charge of, do not disappoint me." It was not a fight to the death, it was just a simple duel in which they'd fight for a simple rule. Many people wanted Aisu to win and many people wanted Kasai to win, it was going to be a fierce duel with many tough consequences but everyone was prepared for that. As the fight began, Aisu charged at Kasai with his katana that had a Icy appearance, it was like the sword had its own soul and a cold one at that and kasai charged at Aisu with a katana that was coated with a flame cloak... It truly was a fight of opposites. The fight began with two brothers who were simply fighting for different causes, not much hatred was thrown in between and everything was going well, no one was hurt or injured so far... Until the fight grew on, it had been two days now, the brothers were growing tired and started to throw hatred at each other and grew more angry as each hour passed. Upon the fourth day, Aisu didn't even care about his goal anymore, all he cared about was killing his brother but his brother couldn't kill Aisu no matter what... and when the fight drew to a close, Aisu when in for the final blow upon Kasai, which would've killed him and Kasai went to dodge but unfortunately his sister got in the way, trying to stop Aisu... Kasai had no other choice.
"GET OUT OF THE WAY, SIS! HE IS GOING TO KILL YOU!!!" Are the words you could've heard echo throughout the town as Kasai barely managed to swivel himself in front of his sister. The slash sent him flying backwards into her and they both went a decent distance away... Kasai was nearly knocked out, barely staying awake and the sister was regaining focus in her eyes... The next thing she would see when she got her focus back, would be the mental image that scarred her for the rest of her life... As she opened her eyes once more when she was sure her focus had returned she'd look in the direction of her brother, she saw Aisu standing there but now Kasai so she'd look around a little before spotting him off to the left, she'd run over to him to see if he was okay when she noticed something... There was a long gash across his chest stretching to his shoulder... he was also missing an arm and somehow got his eye cut "Brother! Kasai, don't die! You can't die! you have to live!" is what she'd repeat over and over while tears poured out her eyes and then she realized that he might try kill her as well, so she would grab him and run as fast as she could, through the whole village back to their temple but by then, it was simple too late... Kasai... Was gone.

(Ooc: This was chapter one. It was pretty short, I know. If you feel like leaving your opinion the go ahead and be true to your feelings, if you don't like it, then tell me why! I won't be offended. And if you just want to leave some tips on how to make it better, I'd be grateful, I have many more chapters coming, this is just one of many!)