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Post by Distorted Sky on Sept 29, 2015 17:36:12 GMT -5
Name: Skylor Helliac Shane Alias: Sky, Dist, Age: 17 Grade: Junior Height: 6 foot 4 inches Weight: 145 lbsEye Color: ruby red Hair Color: jet black Appearance: img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20070104170654/gundam/images/e/ed/305px-Shinn_Asuka_Phase_21.jpg plus a slim black fuzzy tail Personality: shy at first but is nice when you meet him, he has a hair trigger temper. When he is in a fight he will become very sadistic Fighting Style: He loves a good sword fight but hates guns Strengths: he is quite good at sword fighting and is quite agile. he also is stubborn as hell and well get up every time he's knocked down Weaknesses: his tail is very sensitive. He can't swim. His back is also a major blind spot History: Skylor grew up in the a small with his father, mother and younger sister. His father was a demon and his mother a human, making Skylor and his sister only half demons. Life was good for them until the local church killed their father and mother (who was trying to protect them and we will go over why they were killed later) Sky and his sister, Sally, escaped and ran away and haven't been seen since. But some say his sister was killed over the years leaving Sky alone. Other: His eyes change colour based on his mood
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Post by Amazing Dapper Fish on Sept 29, 2015 17:42:21 GMT -5
Hello~! Howdy Doo!
Your profile is off to a great start! However, I'm going to have to ask what you try to expand your character's personality to at least a paragraph! I would also love to see more detail in his fighting style, strengths and weaknesses as well.
I would also like to ask that you edit your history some. PHS 552 doesn't really have demons. When you've made the edits please respond!
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Post by Luca Walker on Oct 1, 2015 21:38:46 GMT -5
On top of the things said above, you're also missing the Stat/Item Tracker.
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